Jenniiiiiii this is SO LOVELY OMG. I haven't seen or read the source, so am coming to this entirely context-free, but it's still beautiful. I am missing all the nuances, of course, but the way you use the swaying rhythm of the song and the ship together, and that strong beat that pulses through it, is wonderful to watch. I get the sense of a group of people working together to become something *more* than they started, striving towards a common goal and united by the ship they share. I love the way the vid focuses on the ship, the 'one god' who everyone aboard works to protect, and which in return protects them.